She drops by to visit him at work.
He's a soldier in the middle of a battle.
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Cast
| Guy |
Dylan Ramsey |
| Girl |
Karyn Michelle |
Crew
Production Notes
Pre-Production and The Shoot
Coffee Break was shot on Saturday May 22nd, 2004 at Taylor Creek Park in Toronto.
I was afraid that it wasn't going to happen again!, because of the weather this time.
Once again I'm getting ahead of myself. It took me a while to find the
right location to shoot this short. I did a lot of location scouting. This
is one thing that I'll be happy about when I have money to shoot. I'll
be able to farm out all of the things that I don't want to do anymore
and this is going to be one of them.
One of the great things that happened was that Dylan
had done an army stint so he had a background already and he even had a
friend who had the clothes for the part, so that was great.
The call time was a little more reasonable. 7:30am. We all
met on location and Jeanette did the make-up on location. It was threatening
to rain but for the most part it held out.
Corinne was suppose to be helping us out but
she was never able to find us. I made a note to myself that next time,
if I was going to shoot in a location that doesn't really have an address,
I would either have to make sure I had a cell phone or that I would have
everyone meet at my place first.
But the universe sent me an angel in the form of
Jeanette. Every time I worked with her she went way above the call of
duty to help out.
Aside from the threat of rain, the shoot went without
a hitch, except when I got home and finally sat down to look at the dailies.
To my horror, I had forgotten to shoot one scene. I quickly
got on the phone and luckily Karyn and Jeanette were available to shoot the
scene the next day.
Editing
The thing that stood out the most about editing this
film was that I had a lot of choices. Other than the one scene I missed
I had a lot of coverage and Dylan gave me lots of extra choices once we
were on location. It's great to be able to work with an actor that's
always working.
Reviews
Short and sweet, and very funny
Hell, you summed it up so well in the synopsis, what's left
to write? This was an exceptionally short, er, short, and
with it some beautifully observed comedy on ones partner
nipping by the "office" to say hi. I laughed out loud when
the girlfriend called out "Hi Honey" while the boyfriend has
his gun drawn in battle. Well observed gossip followed by
back to work action. Superb. Camera work was great, and,
considering the short running time, really made you believe
you were in battle. Edit was nice, with quick cutting
employed to great effect to show the urgency of the moment.
Sound, sound design and music worked well to make you think
we were "there". Overall, a good and amusing film that is over
all too quickly. Well done to all, and good luck for the future.
-- November 7, 2004 - Justin Bellinger, Chairman & CEO Artistry
Media Limited, UK co-production specialists
That was nice of her
This had a nice short idea behind it. Was that a jungle blend
she brought him? The camera work was good, and the lighting
also. The acting was nice, alot of repeative words by him,
and the audio work was well done. Would of been nice to see
the coffee burst out after hitting the ground. Overall this
is a quick short that has its moments. Id give it a 6 out of
10. -- November 26, 2004 - IMAGINATIONMACHINE
Excellent Short
This was really well edited, I love the quick cuts near the
start especially. Great acting on both actor's parts too.
Very nice colour, and a good clean picture, which is rare
on Trigger Street. Excellent cinematography, some very
interesting, exciting angles used. I love the premise
behind the piece too, I was laughing as I read the
synopsis, and I didn't feel cheated by the piece, despite
the fact I pretty much guessed how it was gonna go, even
before it started. Very nice work, keep it up!
-- November 29, 2004 - Matt Burn
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